
34794 Latimer St.
Abbotsford, BC
V2S 8B8
May 18, 2007
Mr. Rick Thiessen
4081 Clearbrook rd.
Abbotsford BC
V4X 2M8
Dear Mr. Thiessen
First of all I would like to thank you for the effort and time that you have put into putting together our many grad activities. Secondly, I would like to communicate my frustration to you.
Their were a lot of events planned for our grad class but none of the students really had much say in what we did. I know it is mostly our fault for not joining the grad committee. That was because none of us knew about it. And those people who had parents on the committee, their parents didn’t really listen to what we wanted to do. Also regarding the dance, even though it was not a school event, it would still have been nice if someone would have told us all in a big group what was happening.
I know there is not much that you can do about it but I jut wanted to let you know my perspective on these things. And I’m hoping that it will affect the way that you do grad activities in the future.
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter, and I hope that you will change the planning of future grad activities.
Sincerely
Behn Johnstone
1 comment:
Ben, I like the Grad pennant you created above the letter! The formal business letter is well written.
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